Cool like grass
But alas
Breezy freeze
Frostbiting
Lingers long
Sunshine’s throng
Springtime song
Inviting


In honor of the day, I decided to try penning a poem of Irish origins. The Snam Suad won out over the other forms I investigated.

According to Writer’s Digest, the Snam Suad has the following rules:

  • poem contains one eight-line stanza
  • all lines have 3 syllables with the following rhyme pattern: aabcdddc
  • lines four and eight are 3-syllable words, all other lines end in monosyllabic words
  • lines two and three share consonance
  • lines three and four, six and seven, and four and seven share alliteration
  • line seven uses alliteration

I had to write and revise several times, and I followed nearly all of the rules. For those rules I missed, well, rules are meant to be broken, right?

How did I do?



Published by TheOtherKLM

I really hate talking about myself, but if I have to... I’m K.L. McDaniel, the person behind TheOtherKLM. I’m an introvert with extrovert moments, a fitness-minded person fighting later-age fat, and someone trying to keep life somewhat organized without pretending it isn’t a mess. Here, I write about the things I keep coming back to: movement, mental health, learning, self-awareness, and the strange little contradictions that make people interesting. I’m not here to act like I have everything figured out. I’m here to think through it, laugh when possible, and maybe find a little balance in the middle of the clutter. So, that’s me. More or less.

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