When did common become our goal
With basic standards as what we extol
With teachers reduced to a scripted role?

When did students all read the same page
And students advance according to age
As if minds grow best inside a cage?

We flattened the curve so all could succeed
Ignoring we grow at various speeds
Neglecting the nuance of each learner’s needs

We’re training soldiers instead of captains
If we don’t train leaders, what could possibly happen?
We need to reverse direction; this trend we must flatten

Engagement starts when students choose
And use their voice, not someone else’s rules
Innovation begins by breaking
this
monotonous
pattern.

Lament

lament, which is the form I chose for Mandating Mundane, is one of the oldest forms of poetry. It gives voice to grief, loss, or injustice. Laments do not always offer solutions. Instead, they express what hurts and ask us to notice what has been broken or forgotten.

Some of the most powerful laments in poetry include W. H. Auden’s “Funeral Blues”, which captures personal grief with precision, and William Dunbar’s Lament for the Makers, translated by David Ferry here, which honors lost poets through steady repetition. These poems show how lament can be both emotional and enduring.


 

Author’s note: I wrote Mandating Mundane on a day that I was lamenting the loss of teacher autonomy attributed to Common Core. I mourn for the time when we valued creativity and individuality in our schools. Yes, I agree that we would have standards to meet, but what is the cost of meeting those standards? Instead of reaching standards, shouldn’t the goal be to move beyond them?

Your Turn:

Write a lament of your own. Here are three quick suggestions to get you started:

  1. Name the loss and make that the centerpiece.
  2. Ground the grief in imagery.
  3. Resist the urge to resolve the grief.

Please share your creativity with us. Post the poem or, better yet, a link to your poem in the comments.

Published by TheOtherKLM

Hey there! I'm K.L. McDaniel, an introverted extrovert who's into fitness with a bit of a twist and always shuffling through life's organized clutter. Here at TheOtherKLM, I dive into everything that makes us tick—from the quiet corners of introverted minds to the sweat and joy of staying active, all while keeping our mental game strong. I'm all about contradictions that somehow make perfect sense. Think of me as your go-to for exploring how to learn endlessly, live healthily, and think deeply, all without losing our collective minds. It's not just about fitness or learning; it's about finding balance in the chaos and connecting in the most unexpected ways. So, if you're into making sense of life's beautiful mess with me, stick around. We're in for a journey of learning, laughing, and maybe a bit of dancing... metaphorically speaking, of course.

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