Clouds crash
drizzle devolves
into drencher
Temperatures will
tumble
shift rain
into snow
Making morning
commute
slippery and slow
Clouds
crash drizzle
devolves into drencher
He must rise
early
to weather
his winter adventure
Unspoken
promises urge him:
Go
Clouds
crash
drizzle devolves
into drencher
Temperatures will
drop shift
rain into snow
Why Dark and Stormy
Yes, the title is a cliché. That is my point.
I loved reading Peanuts comics growing up, especially the strips where Snoopy sat on top of his doghouse, typing away at his novel. Every attempt began the same way: It was a dark and stormy night. Over and over. Same opening. Same weather. Same stubborn belief that this time it might finally work.
Snoopy never gave up. He kept showing up. He kept writing, even when the words were familiar, even when the opening was mocked, even when the effort seemed ridiculous.
This poem leans into that spirit.
The repetition, the forecast language, the returning storm, they are intentional. This is not about originality for originality’s sake. It is about persistence. About facing the same conditions again and again and choosing to move anyway.
Sometimes the most honest way forward is not to reinvent the storm, but to step into it once more and say: Go.
Click here to begin this story. Here’s what you might have missed:
1. Three houses
2. Winter’s Arrival
3. Bless This Mess