I wonder as I watch headlights sweep the windows, counting arrivals.
The night before feels quietly cold as cars unload the cold.
Away in a hallway, suitcases lean like they have finished their work.
It’s beginning to sound like everyone talking at once, then listening.
We wish you would come in, the door held open, arms already raised.
It came with long drives loosening into laughter and relief.
Far, far away slips off with boots and coats by the door.
Jingle from pockets and phones fades into familiar voices.
Have yourself a seat means you made it, you’re staying.
All I want settles between us, passed dish to dish.
Last Christmas gets mentioned, compared, then gently replaced.
I heard the house grow louder, warmer, full of us.

Challenge Accepted

Writing this poem was challenging. Every line needed to start with a portion of a familiar Christmas song or poem title. It still had to feel natural. Those fragments come with built-in expectations. The poem could have easily become a string of references. It needed to feel like a lived moment. The work involved letting the gathering itself carry the joy. This way, the structure stayed mostly invisible. The focus remained on people arriving, settling in, and being together.

About Themes

When I write, I usually start with a theme. I know what I want to say, but I don’t want to explain it to the reader. Instead, I try to place that idea inside a moment that already holds it, something ordinary and recognizable. If I stay close to the scene, the details can do their work. The meaning has a chance to surface on its own. It doesn’t need to be pointed out or underlined.

Published by TheOtherKLM

I really hate talking about myself, but if I have to... I’m K.L. McDaniel, the person behind TheOtherKLM. I’m an introvert with extrovert moments, a fitness-minded person fighting later-age fat, and someone trying to keep life somewhat organized without pretending it isn’t a mess. Here, I write about the things I keep coming back to: movement, mental health, learning, self-awareness, and the strange little contradictions that make people interesting. I’m not here to act like I have everything figured out. I’m here to think through it, laugh when possible, and maybe find a little balance in the middle of the clutter. So, that’s me. More or less.

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