Setting the Story

I wanted to begin this Christmas story by paying attention to how close things can be without touching. Three houses, side by side, sharing the same cold night, but telling very different stories through their light. One is steady and symmetrical. One is loud with color and announcement. One barely glows at all.

Nothing happens here, and that is intentional. The poem just looks. It notices placement. Balance. Excess. Absence. Meaning comes from comparison, not commentary. From what is lit, what is decorated, and what is left with only a small imitation of warmth.

I wanted this opening to feel still and observant. Before joy, before conflict, before kindness or its refusal, there is simply the view. If the reader understands this quiet arrangement, then the emotional shifts that come later can arrive without explanation.

Published by TheOtherKLM

I really hate talking about myself, but if I have to... I’m K.L. McDaniel, the person behind TheOtherKLM. I’m an introvert with extrovert moments, a fitness-minded person fighting later-age fat, and someone trying to keep life somewhat organized without pretending it isn’t a mess. Here, I write about the things I keep coming back to: movement, mental health, learning, self-awareness, and the strange little contradictions that make people interesting. I’m not here to act like I have everything figured out. I’m here to think through it, laugh when possible, and maybe find a little balance in the middle of the clutter. So, that’s me. More or less.

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